I think you had maybe made some change to this proposal after we talked but some things to consider are: remove the guidance words, make your writing not bold, reconsider your audience as it is too wide. You can take the word count suggestions off too. The actual proposal and the bibliography both need more detail to really say what you are doing, who it's for and why you are making it.
I think you had maybe made some change to this proposal after we talked but some things to consider are: remove the guidance words, make your writing not bold, reconsider your audience as it is too wide. You can take the word count suggestions off too. The actual proposal and the bibliography both need more detail to really say what you are doing, who it's for and why you are making it.
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